Monday, March 28, 2005

Hirsute Pursuit, A Hairy Tale

“You dark shiny strand of joy
I could be with no better boy
But when we fallout its forever
So let’s agree to fallout out together
Our follicles may age
But our love will rage
Even when we fight and strain
To resist separation in the shower drain”

7 Comments:

Blogger Jugular Bean said...

*irate
Damn Blogspot comment issues!
*unruffles hair, adjusts collar

Ah, anyway...nice piece. I wish my hair fall would reduce :(

Btw, "fallout out together" is that deliberate?

10:31 AM  
Blogger Manish Bhatt said...

Ha ha ha. That's great. That's wonderful. That's hilarious.

Encore!

11:11 AM  
Blogger Ostrich said...

Jugular- Of course its deliberate! Thinking about falling out hair was what inspired the poem. It's summer and we all seem to share this doggy trait of shedding...

Manish- Blush, TY :)

9:45 PM  
Blogger Jay said...

Anyone can write a poem.
It takes a "special" person to write one like this.
Brilliant.
I'll let you guess why I put the " around special. :)

5:32 AM  
Blogger Russell CJ Duffy said...

Hey! Have you got a web cam in my bloody shower?

3:16 PM  
Blogger Fist said...

"Singer, songwriter... as you've probably gathered I wasn't very good at math."

Aren't mathematics and music meant to go together, though?! You know that book, Godel, Escher, Bach, I think it wasc alled..

6:15 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Very clever!

3:21 AM  

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